Tuesday, December 20, 2011

YOU


I still feel that taction
where sweat had a role
The liberty to leave
Grip that gripped
A fraction longer

A start which had an end
Your smirk poses to fend
You and you , a cliche.

My mind and body perspire
To the exhaustion of your expectations
I still feel that warmth
That comfort
The ethereal breath
And the fingers locked with yours

Making head ways
I try to deceive
Pretend to be at ease
Intruding in with your whiskers
You bring in the zing.






Posted by Ashish Nandwani at 4:38 PM

6 comments:

  1. RahulDecember 20, 2011 at 6:29 PM

    Awesome man! :)

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  2. KKDecember 22, 2011 at 5:57 PM

    Present, then past, then again present, then again past.....

    Seems like trying to attach your current thoughts to your memories.. maybe some kind of infatuation...

    gr8 buddy...

    p.s. tell me if I misunderstood...

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  3. Ruchi JainDecember 23, 2011 at 7:45 PM

    YOU and YOu,, a cliche,, very nice expression.

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  4. Rahul BhatiaDecember 25, 2011 at 5:03 PM

    Nice One! Merry Christmas

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  5. Sujatha SathyaDecember 29, 2011 at 12:12 PM

    super Ashish :)

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  6. Dreaming Wanderer. www.tonightidream-iwander.blogspot.comDecember 29, 2011 at 2:26 PM

    still feeling the taction where sweat had a role..

    lovely ashish..!!

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