All consumed and moving with the beat
I stepped into the bus and looked for a seat
An incensed nudge opened my eyes
The up's and down's
Bumped her aside.
I stood up giving her a subtle strike
Turned my back to the glares and the strife
With an add-in volume
Adjusted the track
Made an effort but never came back.
Set to go
With a look of recession
What made my day was the
Wink with that passion.
The last line was the best!
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ReplyDeleteneat!! And there is rhyme too!! Added with a pinch of reason. :)
ReplyDeleteNice!! Very nice indeed.. ;) ;)
ReplyDeleteLovely and lively!!
ReplyDeleteDitto as karunesh :P
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mastibhara :)
ReplyDeletegood one:)
ReplyDeleteInteresting poem... :D
ReplyDeleteshort, but, tells a complete story. :)
good one Ashish... The last para is my favorite :)
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